INSIDE BOOK COVER

Tooley woke from a dream, a story spanning millennia. Was it real? Did he want it to be?

A dedicated NAM vet, now CIA operative, had just watched his brother-in-law die at sea. Pirates, strangely, were the culprits. He and Hung were guarding a secret shipment of American nuclear waste to burial in the deserts of Arabia.

Amir bin Ubaidi, a junior Saudi General was establishing the clandestine Force Ten at an undisclosed location. The CIA, the Mossad, even most parts of the Saudi military were unaware. His first task was to transport The Five to their desert jail. The Five were captured, tried and sentenced to life at hard labor after their broody attacks in Riyadh. Their jail was … at a huge gold mine!

They worked in Tunnel Eight, deep in a complex close to the gold mine unseen by satellites or known of by the world, until … Colonel Khalid close the Arm switch, triggering the remote fuel shut off valve. The helo ahead plummeted from the skies. There were global consequences.

Follow these characters as their stories and lives merge. Golden Gate © will pull you in, and lock the bad guys out!

The reviewer said -

* Read your book cover...gave it to daughter since she reads way more than the rest of

us. 
* She said what I was thinking, with no prompt from me.

* Most of the story is summed up in it so there would be no reason to read the book.  It

needs to have open-ended remarks or questions to entice you to want to find out

more of the story and its characters. 

* Maybe u could use a few of the Middle Eastern words/terms that most people don't know what they are in it.

My friend/reviewer suggested going with sales price of first novel at $.99 to establish base of interested readers and fans. Sounds like a good idea.