BLOG POST 263

Tessera Trilogy Blog Post 263

BAM October 2018 comments

Hiatus – one BAM member remarked that I’d be sued, or should be. Not very supportive.

Research into Spotsylvania County School system and the fictional ability to pose as a student to uncover drug dealers.

Met and talked with source for over thirty minutes. Helpful, informative, even provided some suggested avenues required to validate a phony student’s ability to go undercover.

“NO GO” in my notes

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Thus far my draft has reached 53.1K words and a draft page count of 179, of which 82 have been reviewed.

BAM 27 January 2020 critique comments

BAM member –

1.       Numerous, helpful editorial suggestions – agree, working

2.       Correct POV issues – agree, working

BAM member –

1.       Numerous helpful editorial suggestions – agree, working

BAM member –

1.       Good continuation– thanks

2.       Minor editorial suggestion – agree

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Thus far my draft has reached 59K words and a draft page count of 193, of which 65 have been reviewed.